Paksworld

As I warned y’all, the arrival of comments from Agent or Editor (or both) would result in a diversion of time from Book IV back to Crisis of Vision.    Yesterday I got my agent’s comments on Crisis (there’s a chapter he thinks is weaker than the rest, but Editor isn’t there yet) and a heads-up that Editor was about halfway through and had found things she wanted to excise.   So although I’m not starting on any fixes until I have all the comments in, some attention has shifted to that book and not this book.  Thus downgrading (as the investment industry puts it) the projected output this week.

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