Legends II: Falk’s Oath

Posted: March 18th, 2011 under Background, Contents.
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The legends of Paksworld involve a startling number of wicked kings, especially way in the past.    Gird is “historical” in that he’s not that far back and the evidence is more documentary than legendary.   Falk and Camwyn and Torre and others (including such figures as Dort the Master Shepherd, the Blind Archer,  Guthlac Lord of the Hunt) are more on the legendary side, with no direct evidence that they existed.  But for some the tales are so specific it’s hard to think they might not have a basis in reality. 

Falk’s Oath:    Falk was the youngest of seven princes in a kingdom that was not particularly rich.  The three eldest went out on a ritual quest (not stated what this was) and fell into the hands of an evil king who imprisoned them, claiming they’d committed a hideous crime.   Versions of the tale differ in whether they’d committed any crimes at all (one version has each prince doing something unwise at best and possibly illegal, but nothing that deserved what they got.)    The evil king not only wanted their possessions, but the ransom he thought he’d get…and so word was sent to their father that vast sums must be paid, or the princes would be enslaved.    With great difficulty, Falk’s father collected almost the sum demanded, and sent Falk (not wishing to risk the next eldest brothers) to pay the ransom.

Falk was then just of age to be knighted, a youth of handsome mien and very popular for his gracious manners and his generous nature.    As the youngest, he had no pride of place, and–his mother having died at his birth–he had never been indulged, but rather blamed for her death, as sometimes happens.     He loved all his brothers, though they were–as elders can be–sometimes less than loving to him.   He did sometimes imagine  that he might do great deeds someday that would impress his father and his brothers, as any youth brought up on ideals of honor and courage might, but on the whole he did what he was bid day by day without complaints.  So he took the gold, which he knew was not enough, and hoped to convince the evil king to free his brothers anyway.

When he arrived at the evil king’s palace,  and was announced,  he was brought before the king, and there on one side were his brothers, half-naked and bound in chains,  gaunt, with the marks of ill-treatment on them.   Falk would have gone to them and embraced them, but the king prevented him, saying “Have you brought the ransom?”

“I have, ” Falk said, “as much as my father could gather.”     He handed over the bags of gold, and there before the king one of the king’s men counted them out, lip curled scornfully that not all were the large gold pieces, but many were silver or even copper.    And the count was short, as Falk knew it would be…ten full gold pieces short.

“How dare you!” the wicked king said.  “You waste my time with this!  You have coins in your wallet, I daresay.”    And Falk did, money to feed himself and his brothers on their way home.  But at the king’s wrath, and though he knew it would still be too little, he emptied wallet and pockets of everything he had, and stripped the birth-ring from his finger, and the king’s man counted this too.  It was still short, by eight gold pieces and two silvers.  “You waste my time,” the king said.  “If I were not a merciful man, I would imprison you as well and take this gold for the time you have wasted, but it is enough to ransom some of you.  Choose who will go free.”

“Let them go, and take me,” Falk said, looking at his brothers.     He could not imagine going back to his father without all of them.

“What, and then he will send another without the right ransom again, and I will have the feeding of you all that time?”

“No,” Falk said, though he felt now the cruelty in that king’s gaze, and knew that the “feeding” would be all too little, if the king agreed.  But he was young and thought he could stand it better than his brothers.   “No, I will swear to serve you as you please for a term of years…a year for each?…to make up the missing ransom for the one.”

“And your own,” the king said.  “A year for each is not enough.”   Looking on Falk’s youth, the king took pleasure in the thought of spoiling his life, and probably the joy of his brothers and father as well.  “I do not know what your work is worth, not near eight gold pieces a year, I suspect.    Certainly my serfs are not worth so much.  Let me think…you are one of seven brothers…two years for each of you…fourteen years, are you willing?”

“Yes,” said Falk, though he felt a great hollow inside at the thought.   Could he survive fourteen years of servitude?   Yet other men did…some were slaves for a lifetime.    Surely he, a prince bred and trained, could stand it if they could.   “Free them.”

So there in the king’s hall, the king’s men stripped Falk of his princely clothes and threw them to his brothers to wear, and he was put in chains and led away, not even allowed one touch of his brothers’ hands.   One called out “We will keep your place for you!”  and a guard hit him across the face.   Then they, afraid to curse the evil king for fear of what he would then do to Falk, took their leave and struggled home, hungry and exhausted, for they had no money; they had Falk’s horse, but sold the horse halfway home, for food.  When they arrived, the eldest begged his father to raise an army to invade and free their brother, but he refused.   “His mother died to birth him; he owes a life to the crown.”   He celebrated the brothers’ return; he  sought for them beautiful wives, and one by one they married and had children, and they did their best not to think of their brother’s fate, who had bought their freedom.

Falk’s suffering under the evil king can be well imagined–hunger and thirst, beatings and hard work, day on day and into the night, season after season.    He did every kind of dirty work the king could think of, under the king’s hardest taskmasters,  for the king enjoyed seeing his humiliation.   It galled the king that Falk did not complain; he fainted sometimes, from hunger or overwork, but never refused to work until he dropped.   The king had him punished unfairly, sure that would make him complain, but it did not.   Falk held to his oath, and to the knowledge that he had freed three of his brothers from prison and three others from the need of trying to rescue them.

As the years passed, the work and ill-treatment took their toll on Falk’s body, but not his spirit.   He was no longer the handsome, princely youth, but scarred, stooped, stiff of joint.   He forgot the flavor of fine foods, the feel of soft cloth, the comfort of a soft bed and warm blanket in cold, or a cooling bath in summer.   And yet, now and again, unbidden and beyond the evil king’s control,  some comfort came: the scent of wild plum in spring, of roses in summer, the sound of  birds singing…all those came over the walls behind which he lived.    The other servants gradually came to admire him, where first they had mocked, and now and then one slipped him an extra nubbin of cheese, or spoke a kind word to him.   He cherished these as gifts of the gods, as proof that he was right to have sworn that oath, and right to keep it, and he did what he could to ease the anguish of others from the nothing that he himself had.

At last the years of his servitude were up, though he had lost track of the time himself, and it was only by the king’s accountant mentioning the matter that the king was reminded.    He had long grown tired of the game anyway–though he would not have loosed Falk sooner for that–for Falk as a scarred, crooked man looking older than his years was no sport now.  So on the morning of that fourteenth year’s completion, Falk was bidden to the king’s hall for the first time since he had left it fourteen years before.

“My accountant tells me your debt is paid,” the king said.   “Do you have anything to say?”    He still hoped Falk would make some complaint, and give excuse for a final whipping.

“I kept my oath,” Falk said, after a moment of silence.

“You were a fool to make such an oath,” the king said.   And to his men, “Strip him and send him away naked as he was born, for fools have no right to mercy.”   And his men stripped Falk of the loincloth he wore, and pushed him out of the hall, the courtyard and beyond the palace walls, jeering all the way.

But outside the walls, when Falk had stumbled a few paces into the little shanty village that lay there, the people came out and spoke kindly to him, for they knew his story.   This one brought him water, and that one a hunk of bread, and another brought a patched shirt, and another a pair of ragged pants, too wide and too short–but with a length of twisted straw for a belt.    From the village well, someone drew a bucket of water for him to bathe before he put the clothes on.   He could scarcely speak, but they patted his shoulders and sent him on his way with soft words of encouragement.

When he arrived back at his own land, after a difficult journey,  he was but little stronger, and he was almost turned back at the border.  “How do we know you are that prince?  Where is your ring?  You look nothing like the men you claim as brothers!”   But at last he was allowed on his way, and at last he came to his father’s palace and there he found his father still on the throne, but now more gray, and his brothers ranged on either side, and their wives with them, and their children playing at their feet.    Where there had once been seven seats for the princes, now there were but six.

“Who is this beggar come to the king’s hall?” asked the king his father of the steward.

Before the steward could speak, Falk replied, “It is I: Falk, your son who was held captive. ”

“Is it fourteen years already?” the king said, glancing at his other sons.   “If I had thought, we might have had a feast prepared–”  He looked more sharply at Falk.  “You have changed,” he said.

“I kept my oath,” Falk said.

His third brother rose from his seat and said, “Falk, I am sorry–I should have kept better count–but come, here is a seat for you!”

But the king said, “Never mind that–he is filthy and unkempt.   Let him bathe and dress properly and then we shall talk of what is to be done.”

Falk was taken to a guest chamber, not the best, and there bathed, his hair and beard trimmed, and given clothes to wear.    The servants did not seem to know how to treat him, until he was dressed again in princely garments, and even then frowned more than they smiled.    At dinner that evening,  everyone stared at Falk, some with worry and some–including his brothers’ wives–with contempt.  He had not eaten at a proper table for all those years; he had forgotten how to handle the implements of the table.

And yet, free once more, not hungry, not confined, he was happy enough to surprise himself.    For the next few tendays, he wandered the palace,  reminding himself of the places he had so enjoyed as a youth: gardens, fountains,  beautiful rooms.    He went to the stable, and was assigned a mount, but he found mounting and riding painful now, from the damage to his hips and knees.   Still he kept trying,  riding slowly through the orchards and along the fields.   He noticed that most of his brothers avoided him, all but the third,  who spoke kindly to him and had had another seat moved to the king’s hall.   His strength returned somewhat with good food and rest, though the gray in his hair and beard, that made him look older than the others, did not darken.

Finally his father called him in.   Falk knelt, though it was painful, and waited to hear what his father would say.   “I am sorry for your suffering,” the king said.  “But the fact is…I can find no wife for you.  You don’t look like a prince anymore.  You’re too old.    And I have six sons–six other sons.   Why not move out to the country–there’s a nice house, some land, I’ll provide some servants–”

“You’re ashamed of me,” Falk said.  “Though I kept my oath.”

The king turned red in the face.   “Take the house,” he said.  “But leave my court.”

So Falk left his father’s court, and the king’s third son also left the court to go with Falk,  bringing along his wife and their two children.    It had been Falk’s idea to wander the world and help those in need, but his brother and his brother’s wife convinced him to settle somewhere–not in the house the king had promised–and Falk began to teach those who came to him for guidance.

Because Falk was himself a prince, and also his brother,  they believed (especially his brother)  that it was his royal heritage that made him capable of both making and keeping such an oath, and so it was mostly those of noble birth who came to be taught and in later times the followers of Falk, unlike those of Gird, believe that leadership ability (for instance) is inborn and more likely to occur in those of noble birth.   Yet Falk himself was gracious to all, even the most humble who sought his teaching, and insisted that they not be excluded.

It is not known where Falk lived, or exactly when, and Falkians have dwindled, except in Lyonya, since the time of  Gird.

27 Comments »

  • Comment by PocketGoddess — March 18, 2011 @ 3:18 pm

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    What a beautiful, moving story–full of lessons for the thoughtful reader. I see overtones of Joseph, and St. Francis, and I’m left wanting more than the broad outlines you’ve given us here.

    I hope that someday you expand these legends into a full-length book of short stories/novellas, and that you include all of the other Paksworld stories for those who cannot track them all down.


  • Comment by RichardB — March 18, 2011 @ 3:56 pm

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    I can only second what PocketGoddess wrote. I do love these legends: thank you for sharing them!


  • Comment by Rachel — March 18, 2011 @ 3:59 pm

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    Two in one day? You are a blessing and a wonder. I teared up at the end of this one. Thank you for giving me a wonderful ending to a perfectly horrid week with these two stories.

    I was already planning on rereading Oath of Fealty this weekend in preparation for Kings of the North, but now I also want to read Deed to see how my perceptions of certain characters and comments change with the knowledge of these stories.


  • Comment by tuppenny — March 18, 2011 @ 4:04 pm

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    Oath of Falk indeed.
    The phrase always had weight. The resonance is now far far greater.


  • Comment by Robert Conley — March 18, 2011 @ 4:43 pm

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    That great! Thanks for sharing that with us.


  • Comment by MaryW — March 18, 2011 @ 7:24 pm

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    Thank you. I worked in one of those “my word is my bond” businesses and it is something that is not valued enough.


  • Comment by Kerry (aka Trouble) — March 18, 2011 @ 8:10 pm

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    As the years past,

    I think you mean “As the years passed,”

    Sorry – After years of reviewing documents, I find I cannot read much of anything without at least an imaginary red pen.

    An thank you for another wonderful backstory.


  • Comment by elizabeth — March 18, 2011 @ 8:19 pm

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    Kerry: You’re so right. (But now I have to mention that your last sentence might perhaps have started with “And” and not “an…” she says wickedly, on her way to fix her own mistake.)


  • Comment by Adam Baker — March 18, 2011 @ 8:26 pm

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    Thanks!!

    Went to the local Books A Million today, and put in my pre-order, cant wait!


  • Comment by elizabeth — March 18, 2011 @ 8:28 pm

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    MaryW: You’re so right. I was lucky enough to be around some people who were of that type and see what a difference it made. I’m not sure that people who haven’t experienced it can value it…they don’t get what it means.


  • Comment by elizabeth — March 18, 2011 @ 8:29 pm

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    Robert: Glad you enjoyed it.


  • Comment by elizabeth — March 18, 2011 @ 8:30 pm

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    Rachel: I’m sorry about the horrid week, but glad the stories helped.


  • Comment by Kerry (aka Trouble) — March 19, 2011 @ 7:06 am

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    Hoist in my own petard. Yes, that was supposed to be ‘And’ – guess I should read my own writing before clicking the button. Of course, one’s own mistakes are always the hardest to see.


  • Comment by elizabeth — March 19, 2011 @ 8:26 am

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    Kerry: definitely one’s own mistakes are hardest to see. I just thought our mutual typos were proof that even people who intend to be careful, who work at being careful, can slip up. Both of us.


  • Comment by Celina — March 19, 2011 @ 4:44 pm

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    I have always wondered about the story of Falk, and it was quite a sad tale. Somehow that feels like a very typical human behavior of the father, rejecting the broken and weak.
    Also, Falk means Falcon in swedish, but you problary already knew that. 🙂


  • Comment by elizabeth — March 19, 2011 @ 5:50 pm

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    The rejection began when Falk’s mother died giving birth to him. It was of course ridiculous to blame the infant–it was the adults who decided to have all those children. But this does happen. Then, as he was the youngest, he was always perceived as being “behind.” And really…there was no need for a seventh son, from his father’s POV. Having him return the way he was just added to the perception that he was more problem than solution.


  • Comment by Daniel Glover — March 20, 2011 @ 8:47 pm

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    If it’s like other societies with out really good health care and only moderately decent infant mortality it makes sense. Typically children are viewed as old age pensions in many cases with 50% infant mortality and two children to take care of the mother and two for the father in their old age, considering the surviving children will also have families of their own to support (and in-laws). One needs to have eight children to have a decent shot at having someone to support you in your old age.

    Kings aren’t any different, particularly with sons that they send off to war. So seven with a mother dead would be seen as “more than enough”. Not defending the behavior, mind you, just giving some information that I have heard over the years.


  • Comment by Skyehaven — March 21, 2011 @ 11:07 am

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    Excellent backstory! Like many others, I’ve been insanely curious about the origins of some of the religious orders other than Gird’s, and this is just icing on the cake that comes tomorrow.

    I have to say, though, that this story creates almost as many questions for me as it answers. Now I understand why people would swear by the Oath of Falk, but what about ward of Falk? I’ve always assumed that the word “ward” in that particular benediction to be used in the “A means of protection; a defense” sense, but there’s nothing in this particular legend that explain why Falk would be particularly good at warding. I assume he is as I don’t recall anyone asking for the ward of Gird or Torre, for instance, but would be delighted to be corrected if I’m wrong.


  • Comment by elizabeth — March 21, 2011 @ 11:54 am

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    Skyehaven: Falk himself believed protecting the helpless was important, and he and his brother, when they began to teach others, emphasized this as a knightly duty. It’s a little convoluted, to us, but it worked for them, that rescue (as Falk rescued his brother) and protection were pretty much the same thing. After Falk’s death, as the influence of his followers spread, this then included protection from any evil…though Falk never claimed such powers for himself while he was alive. Knights of Falk are supposed to stand between the helpless (or less able) and all danger & evil, defending/protecting/warding them.


  • Comment by Skyehaven — March 21, 2011 @ 1:11 pm

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    Oo, these are exactly the details I’ve been dying for. Thank you!


  • Comment by patrick — March 21, 2011 @ 2:05 pm

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    Another thought I had for “Ward of Falk” was a protection of the mind from despair, as Falk must have had great strength of mind to not despair during his long captivity.

    Elizabeth, your comment about those who have never had an example of oath-keeping causes me to sorrow for and pity those who were excluded from good examples. While Falk-like oath-keeping under extreme stress is rare, a sense of the rightness of keeping your word is of great value in building a society around trust. The Boy Scouts put Trustworthy as the first of their twelve virtues lists in the Boy Scout Law, so others in our time share the Falkian’s value of trust.

    Changing subjects, Amazon predicts my copy won’t arrive til March 28 or later, as I did not pay extra for rapid shipment. I’d like to think part of the delay is due to many other copies going to other readers. 🙂


  • Comment by elizabeth — March 21, 2011 @ 5:27 pm

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    Good–glad that’s what you needed.


  • Comment by elizabeth — March 21, 2011 @ 5:28 pm

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    I hope that’s the reason, Patrick, but I’m sorry it’s going to take a whole extra week, just about!


  • Comment by Pete — March 21, 2011 @ 8:01 pm

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    Another one I’ve been wanting to read more of since I first heard of it. I’m really starting to run out of positive adjectives by this third comment on them, so I think I’m going to go with “wonderful” again, in both the usual and the most literal senses.

    Just doing some fragmentary bits here, as I’m getting a bit tired:

    The bit of the Oathsong at the start of Oath of Gold is another one of those little fragments that always brings a tear to my eye.

    I count myself very fortunate that I’ve begun to find friends over the last few years who truly do hold their word as bond. I made a carefully deliberated decision about six years back that I was going to live that way myself, and it’s been very interesting and rewarding watching as others who feel the same have come into my life since then.


  • Comment by elizabeth — March 21, 2011 @ 9:42 pm

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    Pete: So glad you’re finding such friends, and it’s proof that you are living your values.


  • Comment by arthur — March 23, 2011 @ 5:31 pm

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    This is Arthur. WONDERFUL!!! Seventh sons are supposed to be special, and if Falk was a seventh son of a seventh son… those people become mages,or something along those lines. I see an element of Joseph, but also of Jacob, who served 14 years for Rachel. No wonder Aliam was so willing to sponsor Kieri to the Knighthood of Falk. Dorrin is such a great character!


  • Comment by Antoine — June 15, 2011 @ 1:07 am

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    Really great background story. Now I understand the Falkian teachings and creed a wee bit better.

    Thanks


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