One Month to Go Snippet

Posted: February 19th, 2011 under Contents, Kings of the North, snippet.
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31 days (or 30 by the time most of you see this) and thus time for a snippet.   In fact, a snippet from the very beginning of Kings of the North.   I don’ t think, this close to release, that it’s going to be spoilerific for anyone.

Location:  Lyonya, in the King’s Grove

POV:  Kieri

Falkieri Artfielan Phelan, King of Lyonya, waited with barely concealed impatience for his grandmother, the elven queen of the Ladysforest, to appear for the Midsummer ritual.  Under his bare feet, the moss of the King’s Grove felt cool and welcoming; the fragrance of the summer night, flowers that bloomed no other time, filled his nostrils.  Yet he could not take full pleasure in the soft breeze, the cool moss, the sweet scents.  Where was she?

He had spent the entire short night on the central mound near the Oathstone, expecting the Lady to appear, but she had neither granted his request to come early, nor sent a clear refusal.  He had hoped to use this auspicious day to ask her once again for help with his continuing effort to reconcile the two peoples, elves and humans…but since his coronation, she had come seldom, and never for long.  The whole night she had been elsewhere, and not even his growing taig sense could find the direction.

………………………………………………

Joint rulership is always difficult.   When I first thought of the joint kingdom of Lyonya, elf and human joined together,  I wasn’t really clear on how it worked.  Or didn’t.    That was something over a quarter century ago, and I may have been more optimistic or naive or otherwise unaware of just what was happening under the surface.

And yet the seeds of what’s growing in the new books were planted in the old.    Coming to the story again later, with a lot of life and experience in between, I spotted those seeds…or rather, those sprouts, brave little cotyledons sticking up into the sunlight.  Brave little cotyledons can be growing from plants you don’t want, as well as from plants you do.   These grew from trouble.

Still a mystery in Book IV, two books down the line from this, is what, exactly, was done or not done, and who, exactly did or did not do it.   I think that will be clear by the end of Book IV, but I’m 68,000+ words into it and still don’t have it all worked out.   Old secrets,   buried very deep with great determination…and yet, like a dead rat under the floor, the bad smell of evil eventually comes out where it can be detected.  Though the harm may already be done.

8 Comments »

  • Comment by MaryW — February 19, 2011 @ 11:13 pm

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    Family secrets are the hardest to deal with in real life. Who knows and who does not. And they always seem to cause trouble at the least convenient times.


  • Comment by elizabeth — February 20, 2011 @ 6:28 am

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    You are so right. That’s exactly the kind of thing going on here.


  • Comment by tuppenny — February 20, 2011 @ 4:42 pm

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    I’m counting the days until I get my copy. Haven’t started holding my breath yet!


  • Comment by elizabeth — February 20, 2011 @ 5:06 pm

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    Please, no breath-holding…30 days is too long. (Reminding myself to breathe, too…)


  • Comment by Richard — February 21, 2011 @ 8:03 am

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    Hardly an equal relationship between elven and human co-rulers with her having been sole ruler of her own kingdom (Ladysforest) through a great many human reigns in Lyonya. And I remember from the Deed that it may not even be midsummer in the elfhome. Keep on teasing us.

    More than 30 days for me: I’ve preordered from Amazon UK. Their forecast for Kings reaching my letterbox is 28th-30th March.


  • Comment by Daniel Glover — February 21, 2011 @ 9:16 am

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    It’s almost certainly not Midsummer in the Elvenhome, which could be part of Kieri’s learning curve. That plus the way back snippet of a large minority of humans not getting along with elves and settling on the other side of the river. Mmmm, Kings of the North is but a stepping stone to pulling out the “truth”.

    Paks and Kieri having to get Luap in Kolobia, long strands you weave Elizabeth. Mmmmmm.


  • Comment by Celina — February 21, 2011 @ 10:49 am

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    *Reminds herself to breath*
    I’m looking forward to be able to sit outside, enjoy the spring with a cup of coffe and reading King’s of the North.


  • Comment by Jenn — February 21, 2011 @ 2:25 pm

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    Perhaps the questions will never be answered. My father discovered that he had an aunt when she died that lived a few “farm miles” away. She and his father never spoke of or to each other. No one on either side knew why and those who did were dead.


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