Paksworld

Today’s work was cautious fiddling with the changes already made…should this go here?  Or here?   Should this bit go before or after that bit?   Read some sections aloud.   Ick, a clunky chunk, away with it.   A fossil of an earlier draft: away with that, too.  But this bit from yet another draft…should go back in, maybe?  Put it in, took it out, put it back in, decided to “save as” an alternate form of the chapter. Read the rest of this entry »