{"id":406,"date":"2009-09-26T11:47:48","date_gmt":"2009-09-26T17:47:48","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/www.paksworld.com\/blog\/?p=406"},"modified":"2009-09-26T11:47:48","modified_gmt":"2009-09-26T17:47:48","slug":"revisions-the-list-goes-on","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"http:\/\/www.paksworld.com\/blog\/?p=406","title":{"rendered":"Revisions&#8230;the list goes on"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>It&#8217;s now clear to me that there&#8217;s no way I can finish the revisions before Tuesday, when I leave for St. Louis and then, some days later, points north and east.<\/p>\n<p>Several important responses, from which I expect much impetus to rearrange &amp; rewrite, haven&#8217;t come in.\u00a0\u00a0 I need to do laundry, shop for remaining things I need for the trip (like more cardstock for more business cards) and I have to sing both services tomorrow.\u00a0\u00a0 Time has run out.<\/p>\n<p>Nonetheless, from responses received and my own re-reading, progress is being made, just slower than I wanted.\u00a0\u00a0 I really wanted to be able to present Book Two, all combed and brushed, with its boots spit-shined and its perfectly arranged insignia bright, to my editor when I get to NYC, but&#8230;it&#8217;s not going to happen.\u00a0 Not like that.\u00a0 If she wants to see it, she&#8217;ll see it in a state where I don&#8217;t normally let editors discover what a mess even the late drafts are.\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0 Editors, like agents and alpha readers, always want to meddle&#8230;and editors come cloaked in Authority.\u00a0\u00a0 If they decide something&#8217;s a problem early, then they&#8217;re likely to demand that it vanish from the book, even if the real problem is that I haven&#8217;t yet made it obvious enough why it belongs and is absolutely essential to the final resolution of six lines of\u00a0 plot.\u00a0 (I may not know yet&#8230;and writer-not-knowing is but putty in the hands of Editors, who know not only many books but also how the sausage of publishing is made.)<\/p>\n<p>I will snag one of the dilatory experienced alphas by the short hairs when I visit her after the Ninc conference&#8211;she will not escape me then.\u00a0\u00a0 Heh-heh-heh.\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0 The one I thought I had trapped earlier this week made an agile feint and retreat.\u00a0\u00a0 And time&#8217;s run out, and I&#8217;ve just spent 41 minutes online answering email, removing spam from all the spam buckets, answering a few comments here and there.<\/p>\n<p>I must get ready for the trip.\u00a0 I&#8217;d rather work on the book.\u00a0 WHY did I agree to the trip???\u00a0 (NB&#8211;I&#8217;ll enjoy it once the train starts to move.\u00a0 I always do.\u00a0 But the book, which wants to be done, isn&#8217;t done, and can&#8217;t be done by time to leave, and that&#8217;s like an itch you can&#8217;t scratch. )<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>It&#8217;s now clear to me that there&#8217;s no way I can finish the revisions before Tuesday, when I leave for St. Louis and then, some days later, points north and east. Several important responses, from which I expect much impetus to rearrange &amp; rewrite, haven&#8217;t come in.\u00a0\u00a0 I need to do laundry, shop for remaining [&hellip;]<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":2,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[45,5],"tags":[51],"class_list":["post-406","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-revisions","category-the-writing-life","tag-revision"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"http:\/\/www.paksworld.com\/blog\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/406"}],"collection":[{"href":"http:\/\/www.paksworld.com\/blog\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"http:\/\/www.paksworld.com\/blog\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"http:\/\/www.paksworld.com\/blog\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/users\/2"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"http:\/\/www.paksworld.com\/blog\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fcomments&post=406"}],"version-history":[{"count":2,"href":"http:\/\/www.paksworld.com\/blog\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/406\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":408,"href":"http:\/\/www.paksworld.com\/blog\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/406\/revisions\/408"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"http:\/\/www.paksworld.com\/blog\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fmedia&parent=406"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"http:\/\/www.paksworld.com\/blog\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fcategories&post=406"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"http:\/\/www.paksworld.com\/blog\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Ftags&post=406"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}