Another talk with my agent last week, and I had new things to work on (which is fine, though of course I’d prefer to write absolutely perfect books up front.)\u00a0 One thing he couldn’t explain clearly enough, except that one character’s sections did not work for him…and I kept looking at them and looking at them, and finally…in a “scales falling from the eyes” moment tonight, there it was.\u00a0 An absolutely plain as mud and about as interesting lump of\u00a0 infodump masquerading as an interesting look inside a major character’s thinking processes.<\/p>\n
All informative.\u00a0 All static.\u00a0\u00a0 No reader should have to read that many pages of Gwenno reviewing her reasons for doing something.\u00a0 Was it accurate?\u00a0 Yes, that’s how she thinks and what she thinks.\u00a0 Are some of those points plot relevant?\u00a0 Yes, as showing motivation.\u00a0 But do we need them laid out in order like a plot summary?\u00a0 No, we do not.\u00a0\u00a0 WHY couldn’t I have seen that months ago when I first wrote it?\u00a0 (I was having a lot of fun just writing…)<\/p>\n
Said it before and I’m saying it again…if you’re writing ANYTHING and you start thinking “If I can just make it until the next interesting\/fun\/exciting\/ bit…that’s the part to change or just delete.”\u00a0\u00a0 Gwenno deserves to have her POV sections bouncy and energetic and determined as she is, not pages of her thought processes.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"
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