{"id":2388,"date":"2014-12-20T16:28:32","date_gmt":"2014-12-20T22:28:32","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/www.paksworld.com\/blog\/?p=2388"},"modified":"2014-12-20T16:28:32","modified_gmt":"2014-12-20T22:28:32","slug":"craft-of-writing-ah-research","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"http:\/\/www.paksworld.com\/blog\/?p=2388","title":{"rendered":"Craft of Writing:  Ah, Research!"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>Fantasy requires as much research as science fiction, but slanted somewhat differently.\u00a0 Or so it feels in my head, because the SF stories and the fantasy stories are situated in different places, not just fictionally, but psychologically.\u00a0 As it happens, I like both kinds of research (and I also like flying without wings, sometimes, as in the CHICKS stories&#8211;no research there, nuh-uh.)\u00a0\u00a0 At any rate, I knew the new Vatta book would demand considerable research, despite being set in the same universe, because it&#8217;s set largely on planet.\u00a0\u00a0 The nail-biting moments (well, most of them) will be down in the gravity well.\u00a0\u00a0 And&#8211;just because it had to be, the story demanded it&#8211;much of it is in environments I have never personally experienced.\u00a0\u00a0 (Of course, the space-based stories are in environments I&#8217;ve never experienced, but not even our current astronauts have either, so&#8230;there&#8217;s more wiggle room.\u00a0 Still research, but not likely to find someone who says &#8220;I served in an interstellar empire&#8217;s space navy and you&#8217;re completely wrong about the tactics of space warfare and not only that your conception of ship design is ridiculous.&#8221;<\/p>\n<p><!--more--><\/p>\n<p>But on an Earth-type planet, with characters who are at least recognizably descended from us,\u00a0 a lot more things can go wrong with one&#8217;s research.\u00a0\u00a0 (I have already scrapped an entire sequence..)\u00a0\u00a0 Now the thing about writing fiction that needs research is that what ultimately matters is Story.\u00a0 If Story doesn&#8217;t hang together, getting all the details right will please only a few readers.\u00a0 And if you&#8217;ve been having trouble, as I&#8217;d had in the past year, getting a Story to come alive, putting in a lot of time on research is counter-productive.\u00a0\u00a0 So I had to get the story well started before I dared spend the time it takes to do the research&#8211;it was procrastination, and that point.<\/p>\n<p>Now, however, I&#8217;m ready for the facts.\u00a0 Lots of facts, loads of facts, every kind of fact that can pertain to the story:\u00a0 big massive facts (like learning more about planetary weather systems given the geology, geography, etc. already set up for this planet) and the sensory facts that impinge directly on characters (and thus on readers), that motivate characters to do\/not do certain things, that make the setting vivid to readers.\u00a0 Years ago, I bought a book for research I thought I might need someday:\u00a0 a manual intended to be in every lifeboat.\u00a0 I read it cover to cover at the time, then thought no, I wouldn&#8217;t be needing it any time soon, but&#8230;kept it, because it&#8217;s not the kind of book found in most public libraries.\u00a0 At least not in the middle of Texas.\u00a0\u00a0 Once I knew this new book was alive and moving,\u00a0 I started, as one often does these days, reading online, including trawling through my Twitter follows for useful links, and emailing someone I know in the Coast Guard.\u00a0 Facts began to accumulate.\u00a0 Hence the discarded events of the &#8220;This will never work, nobody will believe it, it was a stupid idea&#8221; section.\u00a0 It&#8217;s still in the ms right now, but it&#8217;s doomed&#8211;it&#8217;s just a placeholder until I get all the stuff that came before worked out. [Writing Rule:\u00a0 Be flexible, be willing to discard anything that&#8217;s not going to work for either Story or Background reasons.\u00a0 But don&#8217;t rush to destroy.\u00a0 Something may be salvageable.]<\/p>\n<p>The facts I was able to find more easily dealt with the background types of things,\u00a0 and sometimes that&#8217;s enough.\u00a0\u00a0 If, for instance, you&#8217;ve got a lot of experience making things out of wood,\u00a0 and you want to write about someone making an item from wood you&#8217;ve never made, all you really need for the story is a set of directions on how to make that item.\u00a0 You know what the tools are, what it feels like to use them, what different woods are like&#8230;you can imagine yourself into the character who is, say, making a coffin.\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0 If, however, you&#8217;re trying to create a character doing something you&#8217;ve never done&#8211;but it&#8217;s something a lot of people <em>have<\/em> done&#8211;then your research needs to encompass how people with that experience felt and thought while having it.\u00a0 You need not just technical knowledge but the touchy-feely kind of knowledge&#8211;if you grab <em>that<\/em> (whatever <em>that<\/em> is) what does it feel like.\u00a0 What does it sound like when you drop it?\u00a0\u00a0 Does it break or bounce or just go plop?\u00a0 If\u00a0 you&#8217;re dealing with a group situation (and I am) what are group dynamics like in that kind of situation?\u00a0 What kinds of characters react well or badly or not at all to that situation?\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0 How do people feel&#8211;physically, emotionally, spiritually?<\/p>\n<p>A common way for stories of unfamiliar events to fail is for the writer to have researched the facts but not the human interface with those facts.\u00a0 For instance, every military veteran has run across stories in which the apparent facts are OK&#8211;yes, that weapon fires that round, yes, that vehicle can move that fast&#8211;but the characters feel wrong because they do not think, feel, or react like real soldiers.\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0 I was watching one of the Alien movies (I forget which&#8211;first or second anyway) in a movie theater near an Army base.\u00a0\u00a0 At one point, there was an audible mutter from all corners of the theater (including from me and my husband) about what would happen next, in reality&#8211;and it didn&#8217;t, in the movie.\u00a0 Coming out, the military guys who&#8217;d watched it were all still griping that X would not have lived past Y because Z would have fragged the [redacted-redacted-redacted.]<\/p>\n<p>So research includes that reality, that human emotional\/psychological reality as well as the reality of spaceship design, lifeboat contents, probable intensity of a storm at sea on a planet of [many defined variables], etc.\u00a0 And for that, you need to find someone who&#8217;s been there (ideal!) or someone who&#8217;s been in a similar situation where the translation to your fictional situation isn&#8217;t too difficult or written material (memoirs, interviews, etc:\u00a0 nonfiction research) that covers the important points.\u00a0 It&#8217;s necessary to be able to meld disparate sources to arrive at enough data to do the story justice, since it&#8217;s likely\u00a0 that no one source will fit your fictional situation exactly .\u00a0\u00a0 I felt I had a lot of the facts I needed of the background kind, but far from enough to go on with of the human-interaction kind.<\/p>\n<p>Finally made it to Book People (indie story in Austin) this past Wednesday and&#8211;not seeing what I needed right away (other than several Christmas present books)&#8211;I asked one of the store clerks, who pointed me to a small &#8220;Adventure&#8221; section. Aha!\u00a0\u00a0 Four books came out of that shelf with me.\u00a0 None of them are exactly what I want\/need, but they overlap very well, and two of them are foundation-level, meaning they&#8217;ll underpin multiple areas of the book.\u00a0\u00a0 Another one may be (but I haven&#8217;t fast-read the whole thing yet.)<\/p>\n<p>Prize of the lot, probably (until I&#8217;ve read all the others I won&#8217;t know) is Laurence Gonzales&#8217;s <em>Deep Survival<\/em>.\u00a0\u00a0 It has theory of, personal experience, and (by interview) personal experiences of others, written by someone with both intelligence and human understanding and also&#8211;really good writing. \u00a0 Just as Dave Grossman&#8217;s book <em>On Killing <\/em>has been a foundational book for me when writing POV characters who kill people,\u00a0 Gonzales&#8217;s looks to be foundational for all survival situations.\u00a0\u00a0 It dovetails beautifully with the book that started me toward this particular story, Alfred Lansing&#8217;s <em>Endurance (<\/em>read sometime back)\u00a0 and with Gregory Freeman&#8217;s <em>The Gathering Wind <\/em>(about the Bounty&#8217;s loss in Hurricane Sandy) and Adam Rackley&#8217;s <em>Salt, Sweat, Tears: The Men Who Rowed the Oceans<\/em>.<\/p>\n<p>So far I&#8217;ve read all of <em>Deep Survival<\/em> (some parts twice),\u00a0 a couple of chunks of <em>The Gathering Wind<\/em>, nearly all of<em> Salt, Sweat, and Tears<\/em>.\u00a0 And from those I&#8217;ve been pointed toward additional &#8220;background facts&#8221;&#8230;for instance, today&#8217;s dive into portable desalinization equipment for lifeboats&#8211;types, sizes, limits of, requirements of, details of maintenance, etc.\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0 Including some not-yet-proven ideas for improvements&#8230;and my own consideration of &#8220;What kind of desalinization device would you find on a lifeboat say 500 years from now on a planet far, far, far away from here?\u00a0 What materials tech would have improved.\u00a0 What common problems might still remain?&#8221;\u00a0 Water itself will still behave like water&#8211;but getting from sea-water to drinkable water&#8230;might be very much the same or different.<\/p>\n<p>Note that all these are nonfiction.\u00a0 Researched nonfiction.\u00a0\u00a0 Fiction is not real&#8211;it&#8217;s a combination of real (the writer&#8217;s experience, or some real person&#8217;s experience&#8211;you hope&#8211;)and the writer&#8217;s imagination, shaped to the need of Story.\u00a0 Even the best writers, the ones that you read and then later, experiencing something very similar, think &#8220;Wow&#8211;just like the book&#8221; 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